Tuesday, April 6, 2021

E - Era Driven - #AtoZChallenge

When Maggie woke up, she saw her brothers slipping into their overalls. Burrell always tried to do this morning task silently to not wake his sisters, but Arthur always ruined it. He was far too clumsy to do anything without disturbing most of the county. Their dad said Arthur was born with seven left feet and he's gained a few since then. 

The boys had to get up extra early today to milk the cows before joining their father to fix the barn roof torn up by last week's tornado. Burrell was happy they had four less cows to milk because of that tornado, but Dad had no sense of humor about it.

Maggie tried to go back to sleep since she knew she still had about an hour before her sister would wake her, but it was proving to be impossible. She was just too excited. They were taking the wagon into town to visit the county store. She had been looking forward to this trip because it would be the first time she and her sister went into town without their mom or dad. This was a big day. 

Maggie's older sister, Roberta, had just turned twelve on Tuesday. In their house, turning twelve years old meant having adult responsibilities and Roberta was very excited to take on her new role. Today was going to be one of her first big tasks outside of her new household chores. Because Dad and the boys were going to be busy all day working on the barn and Mom had to stay in bed because of a fever, Roberta was the one to make the run into town this week.

Maggie was only six years old, so she had to go along since there would be no one to watch her at home. Roberta had always been Maggie's best friend and playmate and she couldn't wait to spend a day in town alone with her sister. Town was six miles away, so it took almost two hours to get there. They were going to be gone all morning. All by themselves. No parents.

Maggie was pulling water from the well for the dogs when she heard her father calling that it was time for them to go. He had harnessed the horses and the wagon was ready. Maggie ran as fast as she could and crawled up onto the bench seat beside Roberta who was getting some last-minute reminders from Dad about caring for the horses. Roberta listened intently and promised to do everything her father instructed.

Dad paused and patted her knee. "I know you'll be fine. Keep an eye on your sister. We'll save lunch for you."

Roberta whipped the reins and they started moving. Maggie was bouncing in her seat as they exited the farm. She smiled up at Roberta, who was intently watching the road and sitting very straight. She was taking this errand very seriously. Maggie beamed, "At school, Anne told me they have new ribbons in the fabric store. I can't wait to see the bright colors."

Without breaking eye contact with the bumpy road, Roberta replied, "Everything we are to get is at the general store. We aren't going to look at ribbons."

Undeterred, Maggie went on. "The fabrics are almost right across the street from the general store. I can look while you get the things in the store."

"No, Dad said I am to keep my eye on you. You can't get out of my sight."

Maggie hung her head. "Okay," but excitedly looked up, "We could get some caramels or butterscotch!" She beamed up at Roberta.

Roberta looked straight ahead. "Dad gave me a list. Sweets are not on it and this is not a play day. We get there, fill the list, and come home. Got it?"

Maggie plopped back in her seat and crossed her arms. "You were more fun when you were eleven."


#AtoZChallenge 2021 April Blogging from A to Z Challenge letter E
 
All this month, I am participating in the A to Z Challenge. A new post will go up every day (except Sundays) using a letter of the alphabet as the starting off point. My theme for the month is literary genres. I am writing in a different genre of flash fiction each day. Today's letter is E for Era-Driven.

10 comments:

  1. You clearly showed the era without really saying anything about it. Clever! (I'm picturing Little House on the Prairie type era?)

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    1. That's pretty close to what I had in mind. I was picturing my Grandmother as a child. I know she used to ride into town on the wagon with her father. She was the youngest of five. She loved it because they would always get a big chunk of bologna to share on the way home.

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  2. With the state of the world at the moment, it's much easier to write stories set in a past era. Enjoyed this.
    https://iainkellywriting.com/2021/04/06/the-state-trilogy-a-z-guide-e/

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    1. Thank you. It is easier. Although, this was a fairly simple story.

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  3. Aw, poor Maggie. She thought it was going to be a play day.

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    1. Yeah. And her sister is just SO focused on being responsible today. Their days may never meet again.

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  4. It's not easy having to be the responsible one! Lovely characterizations of everyone in this piece.
    Black and White: E for Eden

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  5. I guess in the old days 12 would be a reasonable mature age so 6 years old probably don't know why her sister is no fun.

    Have a lovely day.

    My A-Z posts are here.

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    1. I figure driving a carriage isn't the same as driving a car, so a child could handle it. And getting things off a list isn't that big of a chore. Especially since the shopkeeper of the time would probably get most of the stuff on the list for you.

      But the 6 year old has the short end of the stick. No fun and no explanation why. Thanks for coming by.

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